Talking Head Dopplegangers – TIP

Spectacular Spiderman #182 p.14

Sometimes Talking Heads don’t appear as just closeup head shots. Even full-body panels can be talking heads.

Remember, the medium of story is CHANGE. Looks at all these panels of wasted opportunity… chances, to carry and support the narrative visually.

What a shame.

Technically, in the last panel, Vermin’s right foot has crossed over his left (no idea the significance of this) and his teeth are showing… but if you didn’t look with a microscope, you likely missed the change.

Also, notice this talking head page is overwritten at 247 words on the page. (Working Writer’s Guide to comics teaches 150-180/page.) That faux pas tends to go hand-in-hand.

 

Destiny video game comic:

Then again, sometimes talking heads come at you head on.

Good grief, a full-page talking head behind a mask.

 

I don’t know who wrote this comic for Bungie, but I’m guessing it wasn’t an experienced comic writer. ▪

About the Author —
Nick Macari is a full-time freelance story consultant, developmental editor and writer, working primarily in the independent gaming and comic markets. His first published comic appeared on shelves via Diamond in the late 90’s. Today you can find his comic work on comixology, amazon and in select stores around the U.S.  Visit NickMacari.com for social media contacts and news on his latest releases.

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